love or no love

• Artist: hott_emokid
• Description: a neat poem that i wrote for my emotions to a girl hope u like it ^_^plz vote fair and kept in mind this was the first poem i ever wrote.
• Date: 12/19/2008
• Tags: love love

As i sit and look up at the moon
I cry myself a little tune

I wonder where you are
I wonder how you are

You are just so sweet
And every night for you i weep

So now i lay down my head
I start to think its time for bed

But then suddenly it hits me
Can me and u ever be

Then it dawns on
We couldnt ever be

So i turn back down into pillow
And start to weep and cry and bellow

I look around and start to wonder
I think a little bit and still ponder

Is it you or is it me
It is obviosly me cant u see

It all started when i looked up at the moon
And cried myself a little tune

That little thing became so big
I cant believe it really did

So now we know its because of me
Im the reason we can never be

We could take the chance and try to see
If we could ever be

But if we dont take that chance
We may never see

Comments

[Luna Deslumbrado]

really you only didnt do 5/5 cos he didnt like yours?

[Devilish Reminder]

It's cute but I didn't really enjoy it. I think the flow of the whole thing was a bit difficult to catch. I'll give you a 3/5...And would you care to tell me why my poem sucked?

[Luna Deslumbrado]

aww that is so cute, im favouring it