Thinking.

• Artist: bakunet
• Description: This is the first good poem I've ever written. I've also posted it along with a few others in my journal.
• Date: 12/19/2008
• Tags: thinking

I was in darkness
A fog clouded my mind
I could not think
I could not feel
Only blackness

An inter stigmatism
I was blind inside
Dark
I could not see
I was lost

I prayed for death
No
Begged for it
Too much insanity
Then came the light

All was clear
The fog lifted
No more blackness
I looked into my mind
I learned

Remember the forgotten
I knew who I was
I could think
Finally the curse lifted

But I had changed
I was different
I was happy
I could live once again
And live I did

Comments

[MJgwarrocker66]

5/5 written very well. i used to be in the dark also. i posted poems recently. let me know what you think if you read them.

[Sofie_Pofy]

same here smile

[-Animetal_for_all-]

that poem sounds a lot like a recent change i made in my life, thanks i;m inspired now!