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to the day;
the day you left
With just a phone call
I remember.
Never in my life I swear,
have I ever been so scared
but when I heard the words
i knew it was there.
You had done something,
though I didn't know,
but then into the blue
the colors show.
With words like
"Scum of the earth"
"What a horrible man"
harsh words they tell me,
and I understand.
What you did is unforgivable'
but even still,
i love you the same,
im here for you dad,
ill help carry your shame.
- by Black Blood Orchid |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/19/2008 |
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- Title: Worst phone call i ever got.
- Artist: Black Blood Orchid
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Description:
why was i the last one he choose to call, out of all of us kids, and his family, why did he call me? i still don't know... but i do know that i cant get his words out of my head. 5-20 years is a long time to be without a dad.
p.s. its been a wile sense i have done poetry, but i did read over it carefully. vote fairly this is coming from my heart. (though constructive criticism is appreciated) - Date: 12/19/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Mista Trappa - 10/14/2009
- dam... ey fa real thts deep i got da same thing wit ma father he died wen i waz 3 i even wrote sumthin bout him 2 keep it up
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- miseryrising - 01/22/2009
- try not having your dad period...my died back in o6
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- AsianDomination26 - 01/20/2009
- That's beautiful.
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- Flaccid Acid - 01/15/2009
- I received a similar phone call a few months ago. I know I cant say I know your pain exactly because everyone is different but I lost my dad too, just last September, and I was very close to him. This was a great poem. Keep it up.
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- Veronica_Valentine - 12/19/2008
- sad it's written beautifully, made me tear up. Really shows how wonderful of a person you are, and the poem is obviously from the heart. <3 ya girl, keep strong.
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- ioriz3ro - 12/19/2008
- u could say that im familiar with the feeling
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