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Heat radiates in waves
From countless flames
Causing the very air
To scorch my skin
As it caresses my face
The smell of brimstone
Mixed with the rotten scent
Of burnt flesh
Slips through my nose
Sticking in my throat
Forcing the rank taste
To linger in my mouth
Screams of pain
Echo across
The burning wasteland
Reaching my ears
Resonating inside my head
Pulling me toward it
The never ending pit
Full of souls
Tormented
Tortured
Slashed
Lacerated
Maimed
Distorted
Suffering
For their iniquitous sins
Fear becomes rain
Washing over me
Joined by pity
Becoming tears
Filling my eyes
As I stare
Into the vast pit
Of agony and despair
I try to run
Unknowing of where
I’m going
As I race in circles
Lost and confused
A thunderous laugh
Overwhelms
The cries of the condemned
Causing the ground to shake
And my body to vibrate
As a monstrous figure
Appears before me
Towering over me
His shadow consuming
Me and the pit
Now silent
Muted by horror
His monolithic body
Crimson skinned
As though bathed
In the blood of millions
Horns
Black as the deepest void
In the darkest corners of space
Protrude from his head
Eyes
A sinister yellow
Demonic
Pierce through me
Looking past everything
Every lie
Every truth
Every deed
Every sin
My mind frantic
Unstable and shaken by terror
A voice screaming
Inside my head
Commanding my legs
Pleading them to run
Yet
They stand frozen
Unwilling to listen
His judgment made
He tosses me into the pit
His laugh overpowering
My banshee shrieks
My hands reaching out
Hoping someone
Will grab them
But
No hand reaches for mine
No one even tries
They only watch
With pained
Yet curious eyes
As I fall into an eternity
Of fire and flames
- by Hana-CHaN02 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/21/2008 |
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- Title: Fire and Flames
- Artist: Hana-CHaN02
- Description: This is another poem i submitted to a small publication and i would really like to hear second opinions on it before i receive the publisher's opinion. So please rate and comment and check out the rest of my gallery too.
- Date: 12/21/2008
- Tags: fire flames hell devil pain
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Comments (1 Comments)
- onlinepunk - 01/07/2009
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Wow! I can see you put a lot of work into this...
GREAT!!
It is beautiful! - Report As Spam