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The star of my night, the sun of my day
In your arms i lay, beautiful I say.
Loyal to you i will stay, only love i shall display.
Will stand by your side, to you forever be tied.
In front of you I stood brave, and my heart to you i gave.
Me you never ignore, which touches my very core.
When we first kissed, my world you have flipped.
It is so true, very much i love you.
- by Zack_Blaze1 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/22/2008 |
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Comments (5 Comments)
- the amazing sunny - 10/22/2009
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its good
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- Utsukushii_21 - 12/22/2008
- i like i give 5/5 man i'd give this 10/10
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- Zack_Blaze1 - 12/22/2008
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Yeah, i should really stop the rhyming =] will improve next time.
And.. even if that's one line, you still deserve more than nothing - Report As Spam
- SmileCute12 - 12/22/2008
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i liked it alot
and you didnt have to give me credit cuz i only helped with one line >.<
5/5 =) - Report As Spam
- xi will always love youx - 12/22/2008
- Its good, but I think you are stressing the rhyming to much. Remember that could be a beautiful poem without rhyming at all.
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