Remember

• Artist: SmileCute12
• Description: i wrote this a few days ago
• Date: 12/25/2008
• Tags: remember

Teardrop falls down my face
All thats left between us: space
But don't forget what we shared
Even though I know you're scared
Remember the way I smiled
Inocent as a child
Recall where we did lay
As we watched the sun fade away
You I will allways think of
And hope you remember our love

By: Maddy Dugdale*

Comments

[rockstar135105423]

aww, short and sweet!

[SmileCute12]

thank you biggrin
but um idk i just liked the way it sounded

[Phoenix Aria]

Just a suggestion, but for the second line, could you have used "is" instead of a colon? Other than that, I really liked it =) Good job

[SmileCute12]

aww why?

[Zack_Blaze1]

aww, that is so sweet, and sad. If i would read that a year ago, i would probably cry =/