A hole in my soul

• Artist: O-O celestial O-O
• Description: please comment on how you like it.
• Date: 12/25/2008
• Tags: hole soul

Inside i feel as if a hole,
has torn into my heart and soul.
A deep forboding sense of fear.
A horrible cry i cannot hear.
I wish to someday find the sore,
so a joyful day i can see once more.

Comments

[Zerosplit]

Its good but short and simple. I feel as if there is something missing.