Bitter lost and sorrow

• Artist: Yukira_Kuchiki
• Description: Please read and leave a comment I would really appreciate it Than you.
  This is just some thing I wrote while listing to Beethoven Moonlight Sonata
• Date: 12/29/2008
• Tags: bitter lost sorrow

Hes' gone
Its plain simple he's gone
From my life
From my world

What am I to do?
He meant everything to me,
how can I go on?
Is their anyone who will understand me?

Why,why did he leave me?
Why did he leave me all alone?
Oh please just come back to me
Please someone bring him home
Just please just bring back to me?

Bring back my love
please give him back to me
I beg of you

Comments

[rockgirl2012]

i liked it and i know u got the idea from listening to a song but i hear poems like this all the time from my friends. i like the poems that r out of the ordenary like when a writer normally writes about pain and then for no reason writes a great and joyful poem. by the way u came across this poem it is great but it could be more like if it was from ur soul

[rockgirl2012]

i liked it and i know u got the idea from listening to a song but i hear poems like this all the time from my friends. i like the poems that r out of the ordenary like when a writer normally writes about pain and then for no reason writes a great and joyful poem. by the way u came across this poem it is great but it could be more like if it was from ur soul

[apollos_girl freind]

well not my charector its realy my neeses

[apollos_girl freind]

love it 5/5,plz rate the poem my other char made called poem of insanity!done by princess onix.

[VictoriouslyWanted]

its good that you listen to music for inspiration, but ive heard poems like this a billion times. its just something someone else has already done before. try to be yourself. try not to use the same thing over and over unless its meant to be repetitive.