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Her hands look like they should be soft.
She’s the type of girl that takes care of things in her life.
She pays the rent, feeds the cats, and earns straight A’s.
Not to mention she deals with a narcissistic mother.
I never expected hands could be as calming as hers.
Granted, I never actually held them in my own,
But many times she would place hers above mine,
Stopping time with a simple touch.
She was always witty, clever to no accord.
The only time I didn’t mind being called John was with her.
Something about her tone made me adore it.
Adoration has always been an unfamiliar feeling for me.
Her warm hands gently touch mine.
Nearly scalding me,
My heart jumps with pleasure.
Her gold ring speaks to me.
In that instant, I see the true her;
She is my Fountain of Youth, but also my forbidden fruit.
I yearn to be near her, for she will save me.
But I can’t. Not yet, at least.
Her hand lets go, leaving me weak.
The pumping gets louder.
We quickly regret our biggest mistake,
Forever hoping for a part 2.
- by Johnnie the 5th |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/31/2008 |
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- Title: Something New
- Artist: Johnnie the 5th
- Description: Well, I wrote this as a Senior... almost a year ago... I rather liked it, and I'm just looking for some feedback to it... The topic was "Write a 6-stanza poem about hands" ... I didn't want to go the generic route by saying "his hands were as wrinkled as an old leather chair" so instead I wrote it about a girl I never really knew... I hope you like it though...
- Date: 12/31/2008
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Comments (1 Comments)
- DanaDazed - 01/01/2009
- AWWW johnnieeeee thats soo cute XD tis super adorablenesss!!!!!!!! u need to write a poem about me hehe ^-^ this is such a sad story too.. =( its very touching and personal-that's why i love it!!! ur a great writer, post more poems please *pouts*
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