Empty Eyes

• Artist: Muse9420
• Description: this is suposed to be a rap and it about well me. also i wrote it for my english class and i scare the living day lights out of every one in my class and my teacher thinks i need professional help (my teacher gave me a b on this and i think its messed up. i mean its good...isn't it?)
• Date: 01/02/2009
• Tags: empty eyes

I hide the tears from the people who hate me
For they dont think I should be
Nothing about me is quite what is seems
I hide myself away in the moonbeams
They fear me for I smile and walk away with empty eyes
They dont see the reason behide my empty eyes or why I hide
I just make everything look alright on the outside
I laugh but I still have cold empty eyes
But yet my dream it still never dies
They fear me for I smile and walk away with empty eyes
Yes its true the one with cold eyes also has a dream
I dream to be viewed as more than I seem
You may look at my eyes and see nothing there
You may look and see im insane but still not care
They fear me for I walk away with cold empty dead eyes

Comments

[nintendo_freak64]

It's sad but good. Maybe some capitalization would do but i like it.

[The Judged Book]

What? This is a really good poem.

I agree, you're teacher needs to stop HATIN'.

[iiMistress Midnightii]

i think your teacher needs professional help! thats really good.