Sad for her...

• Artist: Tushy Lynn
• Description: This is something I wrote in my journal, I really like writing poems and such, so I thought I'd see what others had to say about it. Please give constructive critism, no rude comments, alright? Thank you!♦
• Date: 01/05/2009
• Tags: hate sorrow lying suffering pain

Now she hates herself, after lying to every friend,
And all she really wants is for her pain to end,
But the monsters and shadows beside her, say they won't ever mend.

Drowning in this endless sea of lies.
No one here to listen to her cries.
Agony and suffering, as she says her last goodbyes

Comments

[happyhappy221]

I love it It doesnt have to be long to impact someones life. 5/5

[Tushy Lynn]

Ah, I see. Thank you.

[Jade of the world]

good job 4/5 it should be a bit longer so we can learn why she's dying