The Scar

• Artist: Fake Silence
• Description: This is the first time I ever wrote something this EMO.
  And, i personally think it's quite okay for a first time...
  Tell me what you think of it and, how to improve.
  I know it's short.
• Date: 01/08/2009
• Tags: scar

A broken plate is quite useless.
My broken heart took quite a long time to recover.

And, now,
Even though it's almost healed,
I know it'll forever leave a scar...

A scar,
Just like the one I have on my left wrist,
The one I carved,
The day you walked away.

Comments

[tear goddess]

Cool poem. I would have to saaay.. The only way you could improve this... Errr... I guess would be improving the matching of syllables... Maybe. You know, give it a ring. As for our spelling differences, I'm Australian, so the mistakes would be because I was writing in a hurry. I will correct any mistakes I notice when I have a chance. Thanks for your comment, check out my other stuff maybe? Lol.