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When I hurt my knee
Or broke my arm,
You were never there.
When I was sick
And wanted you,
You were never there.
When I was alone
And in need of a friend,
You were never there.
You never cared,
You selfish old man.
- by OrianCynffron |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/10/2009 |
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- Title: Never There
- Artist: OrianCynffron
- Description: wrote this for English I last year. it's about my father because he really is a jerk and we had to write something "angry". rate and/or comment if you wish.
- Date: 01/10/2009
- Tags: never there
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Comments (5 Comments)
- heavens_little_devil23 - 09/06/2009
- I kno how you feel my father is a jacka** and doesnt pay much attention to me and when he does it's to tell me I'm worthless...I really like ur poem, kepp writing 5/5
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- KIMANI113 - 01/11/2009
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I really like it^^
And I hope he is here for you, now smile - Report As Spam
- Metal_squirrel89 - 01/10/2009
- Tis Good
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- OrianCynffron - 01/10/2009
- no...he was just a lazy jerk. still is for that matter. thanx for commenting and rating.
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- supergirl10895 - 01/10/2009
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wow... what a father, you had to write something ANGRY for a subject at school?! O_o that's news to me.
well, perhaps your father wanted you to be strong. To learn not stand on your own two feet. To not need a helping hand, instead to become the helping hand. - Report As Spam
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