Hope (Ad Hominem)

• Artist: Leprosy Breakdance
• Description: This was written today, because it's all too common for people to lose their hope. I hope you like it.
  Interestingly, the stanzas were written in order from the fourth, then the second, then the first, then the third, then arranged. The final stanza is meant to sum the others up.
• Date: 01/12/2009
• Tags: hope hominem

To The Poor:

To the poor
and forced out of door-
remember what you live for;
someday, you'll have more.

To The Victims:

To the victims of the violent
and those forced silent,
you must not bite it,
just continue to fight it.

To The Beaten:

To those who are beaten,
whose hope time has eaten,
may your wounds heal
that you may see again.

To The Mistreated:

To all those mistreated,
berated, hated, deleted:
There is still hope,
you must only see it.

Comments

[Systematical Chaos]

Nicely written. The rhyme seems a little bit forced, but for the most part, it's good.

[i-strawberrys]

I give you a 1, because Poor, is spelt with five o's. Victim has a K, Beaten doesn't have a, a. And Mistreated has two s's...

[Dissolve the Pain]

amazing...damn..so fricked good..i love it...write some more!! 5/5