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Serenity rings soundlessly atop a suburban town
Flakes of frozen liquid dancing down a puffy white sky
Blanketing porches and rooftops
Some come out to view the piece of heaven that fell to Earth
While others watch from behind the glass
Peace.
- by eyesofanangel667 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/15/2009 |
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- Title: Snow
- Artist: eyesofanangel667
- Description: Snow=)
- Date: 01/15/2009
- Tags: snow
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Comments (2 Comments)
- eyesofanangel667 - 01/24/2009
- uh thnx i think xD i wrote this when i was bored...i guess you want me to stick to the whole "puffy white fairy flecks of happiness" thing?! Snow is hard to describe without being cliche.
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- Frisky Shadow - 01/24/2009
- When you say "frozen liquid" it makes me shiver, only cause it's an ugly way of describing snow. And since when in th sky puffy? You haven't een seen snow have you? O_o
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