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When I saw you I didnt care
When I spoke to you, are love went nowhere
When I looked again I knew......
That now my heart belongs to you.
- by whoa-there-sailor |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/15/2009 |
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- Title: Love Love Love
- Artist: whoa-there-sailor
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- Date: 01/15/2009
- Tags: love love love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Renata Of the Volturi - 05/29/2009
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It's ok. It flows nicely....But you need to put more emotion into it. Cuz it's too short. When you get all the love emotion out of you then you can make it longer and flow even better.
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- Gerard_Ray_Frank - 01/23/2009
- Good but too short
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