-
the river flows with darkness inside
the river flows with death by it's side
the river flows with the heart of the lovers
the river flows with the whispers of the others
the river flows with the gossip of the ladies
the river flows with the hammers of the men
the river flows with each heart beat you make
the river flows with each life it takes
- by X-CrazyZebraa-X |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/18/2009 |
- Skip
- Title: the dark and dead river
- Artist: X-CrazyZebraa-X
- Description: i wrote this about the river i live by. The river used to be beautiful but now has died in darkness. A few years ago 2 of my family members died in this dark river.
- Date: 01/18/2009
- Tags: dark dead river
- Report Post
- Reference Image:
-
Comments (7 Comments)
- lesslife_morekill - 03/20/2009
- It gives a deathly feeling to the river. 5/5
- Report As Spam
- X-CrazyZebraa-X - 01/19/2009
-
i can't
i have to be in a mood
- Report As Spam
- toxic crayon panda - 01/19/2009
-
-mouth drops-
I WANT YOU TO WRITE MORE POEMS!!! >:O
now! 5/5 - Report As Spam
- vice_cereal - 01/19/2009
- really good, like really really good
- Report As Spam
- X-CrazyZebraa-X - 01/18/2009
- anyone else
- Report As Spam
- X-CrazyZebraa-X - 01/18/2009
-
thx anlya
i love your poems more - Report As Spam
- Xx_Deadly_PolkaDot_xX - 01/18/2009
- yay! i love it. 10/5
- Report As Spam
- |
- |
-
Submit
