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What good is having a life if u cant enjoy it? I looK up 2 the sky at day and night but darkess covers my eyes. Lonelyness, darkness, is everywhere i looK.. ...I Need U...
If i could just b one more day, one last time, one last min. with u.
Kiss u one last time, and just feel u around me...
Everything would b Okay...
Blood rushes trough my veins, Adrenaline goes 13 times up than what it should be!, and my boddy, my mind, my senses are asking 2 see u, feel u, kiss u, One last time...
I wanna hear u say: I Love u ...No Matter were we r...
I wanna feel ur arms around me: ...For as long as we can live...
If i could just b one more day, one last time, one last min. with u.
Kiss u one last time, and just feel u around me...
Everything would b Okay...
...One last time...
- Title: One Last Time
- Artist: 9-Sharo-4
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- Date: 01/19/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- AureliaTurner22 - 01/20/2009
- The word kiss is in there too many times and you need to spell out your words. You might also need to spell and grammer check alot of it, too.
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- 9-Sharo-4 - 01/19/2009
- Thnz ^^
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- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 01/19/2009
- hmmm i think u need to check it over again, the word kiss is int there to many times. i think it would be great if u took the same theory but made a new poem. keep trying u can do it ^^
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- Dork Paladin - 01/19/2009
- what is this? its all n00b talk...mostly 1/5
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