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Brenda was surprised
To see Lei in her classroom
Her heart filled with joy
heart heart heart
-Kim
- by NUMBER1JOKER |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/19/2009 |
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- Title: Haiku 4 Brenda
- Artist: NUMBER1JOKER
- Description: Ok, I'm not the best poet. So what? XP
- Date: 01/19/2009
- Tags: original
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Mysterious Fantasy - 01/21/2009
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i ment if he really did
srry
sweatdrop
but i like lei
4laugh
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- Mysterious Fantasy - 01/21/2009
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aww
that was nice
but if her really did
i would b freakin embarrased
he'll tease me straight away!
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- NUMBER1JOKER - 01/21/2009
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yea
i was bored
i just wanted to waste gold XD
haha
i luv hate comments
artigato =) - Report As Spam
- Marionette_Mentation - 01/21/2009
- umm... i rly didn't like it to be honest.... sorry but i think you focused on the rhyme way to much and the city of chicago was repeated a lot... maybe could of waited till very end to type it...
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- Bmwanz - 01/20/2009
- i wouldn't say it's bad; it's pretty good
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- Mysterious Fantasy - 01/19/2009
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damn bestie ^ ^ nice poem! biggrin
and u say u suck
u so don't! - Report As Spam
- Starlight_Miss - 01/19/2009
- It's good. 4/5. Please rate back.
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