Bored dudes poem

• Artist: nevermore154
• Description: I was bored so I did this poem... plz comment your REAL feelings about it
  
  good and bad(but mostly bad)
• Date: 01/19/2009
• Tags: boring poem awkward elements godlikepower

Fire,Earth,Water,Wind,

I love these kinda things,

Love, hope, visions, good decisions,

Are things I like to have,

Love death,corruption greed,

Always want to make me scream,

Life, love, friends, dreams,

Are what keep me going,


These things are what god loves to be toying!

Comments

[skeletoncookiegurl]

Well, It's a little too hippie for me.

[ill be ur sun]

i kinda agree with starlight, theres not much emotion or rhymes in ur poem i think thats what u gotta work at

[Starlight_Miss]

Umm...It's okay I guess. Reminds me of something a first grader would write, though. No offense.