Death?

• Artist: B100DMUFFIN
• Description: i saw it as death, it was more or less my hands doing it on thier own. death was my answar... tho its not always given form by human hands. still close enough.
• Date: 01/19/2009
• Tags: death

This darkness pardons no one, with each breath you draw it near.

So much you search for comfort, but this shadow brings you fear.

Each action affects it's time, it varies from days to years.

It's taken all lost souls and it's shedded many tears.

So many lives forgotten, they are victims lost to time.

Chaos, vengance, hatered, may also commit this crime.

It's calamity untold, putting depression in its place.

The last breath that is stolen, It's love without a face.

It's victimized the lost, the cruel and the weak.

It has cared for no one, it's bitterness at it's peak.

It's the end of all we know, given form by human hands.

It's life collapsing inward, killing everything that stands.

It is peace and it is war, it settles all our fights.

It hinders and it saves as it wanders endless nights.

Comments

[Rose_of_Tae]

I liked this poem a lot. It evokes a lot of emotion. 5/5

[Sapphire Seven]

To me, I found that this could also refer to the death of one's soul or spirit.
Wonderfully written..

[Fake Silence]

Quite good. I like it. 4/5