I don't have a title yet.

• Artist: boy in the box
• Description: I'm not much of a writer but tell me what you think. And if you should think of a good title tell me about that too.
• Date: 01/27/2009
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When I look in her eyes I see all of the good that the world can be. When I see her smile I feel all of the happiness ever felt. But when I see her frown all of reality crashes down around me and should I see her cry all of that reality is thrown into the swirling torrent of hell's fire.So it is for these reasons that I must keep her smiling and joyful for if I don't it seems as though all of the universe will cry in pain and in shame.

Comments

[Kabri]

How about: "The Other Half Of Me"
Very descriptive ... in a few short words you have expressed a deep emotion that a reader can relate to.