Apple Hawk

• Artist: NakedJack
• Description: 3 short poems that sound like nonsense, enjoy.
  Edit: forgot to say, the last one was written with another person(Redeyesgirl11). We took turns with each line.
  Btw, I understand that most won't get what any of the poems are about, so rate it low if you must.
• Date: 01/28/2009
• Tags: sexist drugs rock roll

Apples for Oranges

The left apple
For the rite orange
Rolling up the Hill
Free wheeling;
Sloppy dealing
Apples for oranges
But only there is too,
Few apples
So many oranges
And I take them blue

Rant in Poem Form

Eating the sleep
Begging the sheep
Please, in the cages
Houses and wages
Rent payed to your lord
Rent payed to the Lord
Being told
You are sold
Into the flab
Apart of the fold

Berry

I have no hands, this jar is impossible
Its colour makes the feeling miserable
Now I am blue, like the contents I'm without
The landscape is brighter now, looking about
Peaking from the horizon, a fire ball
Born and died from nightfall
Showing me where I stand, a berry patch
The many colours in my hand I snatch
I weep where I stand

Comments

[MenacingSky]

The first is my favorite of the three. =D
It's not the typical attempt of forcing a meaning. I like that you don't have to 'get it' to enjoy the way it sounds.

[8skerdude]

yo man u should rpobably make seperate entries for them if your gonna do multiple

[redeyesgirl11]

the 3rd i like the best bc i help write you could of said i help as in my name lol still people o helped write it

[Husk3]

I like the 2nd one the most

[ragdoll230]

the first one is nice....