-
Think you know, but all you know is what you think.
Stop this s**t, apologize.
Open your mind, open your heart.
We'r in a place, darkest of dark.
So look up to see the stars.
Can't you see we all burn bright.
Drop the guns, please drop the knives, it isn't right.
Stop this s**t, apologize.
Open you eyes, open your arms.
We'r in a place, darkest of dark.
So look up to see the stars.
Can't you see we all burn bright.
Rise up high from tainted water.
Climb the clouds to reach the moon.
Now take a pure untainted breath.
Can't you see we all burn bright.
In this place, darkest of dark.
Look at yourself, your burning bright.
- Title: Burn Bright
- Artist: Dawnsdust
- Description: i wrote this a while back. Its kinda just something i wish everyone would understand. I hope you like it. Please comment and rate. <3
- Date: 01/28/2009
- Tags: burn bright
- Report Post
Comments (7 Comments)
- boricua chick13 - 03/04/2009
- i liked it it realated to me in a sence of i understand what the person is going through!
- Report As Spam
- Dawnsdust - 02/24/2009
- thank you everyone. <3
- Report As Spam
- Drey Carter - 01/29/2009
- Ooh, I love this. The repetition was wonderful with the loose rhymes and creative imagery. It's so powerful because it's so direct, though. So in your face.
- Report As Spam
- an_t_social8 - 01/29/2009
- Really good poem! 5/5!
- Report As Spam
- crazy crazincraz - 01/29/2009
- rawberry
- Report As Spam
- samuelismage - 01/29/2009
- nice poem i can relate to it wish i can tell my girl stop this s**t apologize lol
- Report As Spam
- -rawr rainbow muffins- - 01/28/2009
- I love it.. it really rocks.
- Report As Spam
- |
- |
-
Submit
