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crimson tears cover her face
becuase of a boy who she loved
had sped away on his mortcycle on a rain day
and arguement is wat cuased it it to be this way
two days since he was gone
she is cryin in the arms of her lovin mom
sayin she misses her man
shed give anything to cuddle with him again
her father sits on the porch lookin in regret
a thought in his head he wishes he could froget
promising himself he will never drink again
wishin his little girl could still see her friend
people standin in a circle
with looks on there face of sorrow
as a coffin is lowered
and lovin boyfriend is laid in the cold ground
a sad girl stands in the bathroom alone
with a blade in her hand wantin to go home
she makes a move she'll never regret
she drops the blade when the test came
she is pregnet
- by shadow_phenix66 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/30/2009 |
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- Title: crimson tears
- Artist: shadow_phenix66
- Description: this is a poem about how a girls dad was drinking and drove and hit his daughters boyfriend after they had a argument
- Date: 01/30/2009
- Tags: crimson tears
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Comments (7 Comments)
- the COOKIE god xXx - 05/12/2009
- wowww didnt expect that ending... 4/5
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- Zeyliic - 01/31/2009
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I feel lots of emotions in this.
This poem isnt like most other poems.
But I don't really get why she's crying blood... but i guess it does show she's über sad(alittle more then sad XD)
But yesh awsome poem. smile
★★★★★(5/5) - Report As Spam
- lovely vikki - 01/31/2009
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wow
this is good
but it is sad - Report As Spam
- Mrs LoneWolf - 01/30/2009
- its kinda sad but I do like it ^^
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- VirgilDark - 01/30/2009
- The writing and the twist are both good it does not seem like what one would think of it's very good
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- surprise43 - 01/30/2009
- good peom man
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- ohbreaunaleigh - 01/30/2009
- wow that made me cry :[
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