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A man of rugged countenance
Never was he lighted by a smile
cold , scanty and embarrased in discourse
backward in sentiment
lean long
dusty and dreary
yet somehow lovable heart
This, I can not understand
his intensity of spirits
involved in his misdeeds
ready to help than to reprove
His affections
Like Ivy
were a growth of time
- by Irreplacable_lovely |
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- | Submitted on 01/30/2009 |
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- Title: His Personality
- Artist: Irreplacable_lovely
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Description:
Hey. This is my first time posting some lyrics...
Please comment and rate, even if you hate.
thanks,
Irreplacable_lovely - Date: 01/30/2009
- Tags: personality
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Comments (4 Comments)
- TakeThis2Heart - 02/05/2009
- i love it. (:
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- the_ashen_child - 01/31/2009
- hmmmm, that neat. You could work on clarity but its really nice ^^
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- iSalma - 01/31/2009
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Ya know, you wasted 100 gold posting trash. No ofenece.. razz
A waste of money. I figured that out when I was posting too much I posted like 4 of these and lost 400 gold. - Report As Spam
- aL ycious - 01/30/2009
- Not quite right for lyrics; words like 'dusty' and 'countenance' are hard to be sung. Also, full of contradictions about the subject... normally that would be interesting, but I'm pretty sure you did that by accident. 2/5.
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