He Flirts

• Artist: Tina Criddle
• Description: This is a poem i wrote on a guess of wat happened to my parents and why i am who i am the crazy mixed up but beautiful woman i am
• Date: 01/31/2009
• Tags: flirts

He Flirts


A giggle a laugh
He flirts with a smile
He said lets take a ride for a while

A moan a groan
Past the turning point now

A crib a diaper
Her life is over now

By: Tina Galloway

This is me in front and my cuz in back

Comments

[290DarkStars]

if you wrote more i might have liked it a bit more... i mean c'mon Tina. I liked it enough to want more. would you mind writing more on the subject next time? But, anyway, I liked it and ill give it a 4/5... please read some of my crappy poems, I hope you like them, ... cuz i like yours enough to become a fan of yours.
P.S. Tell you "cuz" to either wear more, or just dont post revealing pics of her, cuz id rather not see any of that.

[ohmaigod]

i think is good but short u should do it a little bigger and it will b great!=)

[Tina Criddle]

if your gonna leave a comment bout dis dont leave mindless yammer like ummm ok so put words or something worth reading cuz come on i kno u people are smarter than dat so show it be honest but not null witted tell me wat you really think the good and the bad dont be dumb thank you
Tina Galloway