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we were sittin in a park
when i got a call 2 go c sumbody
u ask if i want u tu c** w meh
i told u nu that i would b fine
so i ran off not lookin bk
lil did i kno u were followin meh
when u saw who i was meetin
u got a lil scared
so when u heard shoutin n yellin
u walked up n called mi name
i turned around n walked over tu u
u said u needed mi help rite now
so i left w u
when we got far enough away
u told meh the truth
it was that u knew i would die
if u didnt come
cuz rite after i left
u got a txt sayin
"if i cant have her neither can u!"
so i owned u mi life
but as soon we said our goodbyes
we both would never see each other again
i got a call from ur parents
sayin u died n u didnt feel any pain
i just wish u were still here w meh
ur parents asked if i would b oki
as soon as i got off the phone
i ran tu the spot where i last saw u
i cryed in the rain n wouldnt leave
when mi dad came tu find meh
i was soakin wet n wasnt breathin
he tryed tu save meh
but it was tu late
he read the message i left in mi phone
it said...
"i love u mama n papa, but i just couldnt live without him, plz forgive meh for leavin u, but now i can b w him."
tears fill mi father's eyes as he carried mi dead body home
when mother came tu the door
she knew i wasnt alive
but i still watch over u guys
n when the time comes i will wait for u
at heaven's gate
- by Aka Kitsune Oni |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/01/2009 |
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- Title: Friends until the end
- Artist: Aka Kitsune Oni
- Description: i was just bored in class on day so i desiced to write this poem... i was feelin rly bad when mi friend was killed... so yah...
- Date: 02/01/2009
- Tags: friends until
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ll Tears of Joy ll - 02/02/2009
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wow
i was like crying by te end
i agree with the slang stuff though
but still it was very good
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- OMG You Killed Kenny1596 - 02/01/2009
- i love your poem, but the shorthand stuff takes away the mood of the writing. you'll get beter votes it you re-submit it normally. Aside from that, its a great poem! 5/5
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