My 1 tru love!!

• Artist: X_I LOVE CHARLOTTE_X
• Description: This poem is 2 my gf that i love so much Charlotte ^^
• Date: 02/02/2009
• Tags: love

I asked GOD to give me a home; he didnt gave me that.

I asked GOD to give me a family; he didnt gave me that.

I asked GOD to give me a true love; he did gave me that.

I asked GOD to give me an angel; he gave me "YOU"
heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart

Comments

[Scarletgreen]

'gave'?
In my opinion, it is sweet, overdone, and if you want it to be powerful;
proper English would be nice, thank you.