See-Sun

• Artist: Zeta-sensei
• Description: Just a poem I wrote in English one day. Nothing too special, nothing too deep.
• Date: 02/02/2009
• Tags: season winter spring summer fall

Cold
Oh so cold
White blinds my eyes
Layers
So many layers
Yet I shiver still

Warm
Warmer than before
Flowers bloom
Light showers fall
Less layers
I'm warmer now

Hot
Sweltering heat
The sun fires its deadly beam
Sweat, I shed
Swim, I must
Hot, though it means freedom

Cool
Cooler now
The temperature is balanced
The leaves fall to my level
Watch the trees change
and prepare for the cold
who once again strikes

Seasons
See-Suns
The time you see the sun
Which varies by the Seasons

Comments

[Shadow-on-a-moonlit-night]

That is really good, the way you finished each stanza made me almost desperate to find out what the next one would say. 5/5

[anime_freak_kouga]

I actually really like it. In the begining I was wondering why you called your poem "See-Sun". I like how you explained it near the end.

Five stars ^_^