A Womans Heart

• Artist: Moonlight_Maiden123
• Description:
• Date: 02/06/2009
• Tags: womans heart

A delicate yet complexing object that lies
Within every girls chest.
One is never the same, they never beat a similar
Measure, but each seeks
A purpose to beat too.
Now and forever it
Shall continue the same pattern. Unless
However, the delicate object stops to beat.
Everything can be destoryed
All can be thrown away if it is harmed through the heart and only that.
Recovery is not an opition for the poor thing. Not even
Time can repair it, nor save it from the terrors in this world.

Comments

[emeraldpuppy9]

great job <3 5/5 :3
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rate/comment bck?

[Sunlight_Maiden456]

UR 2 GOOD 5/5! heart

[scitama]

I liked it! You do well with these types of poems I've noticed.

[Phinagin2000]

i wouldn't know, but it's great, gj again!! ^^

[cherry_rose7056]

ur a a true poet!!!

[NakedJack]

So true, it will continue unless it doesn't, inspired. How did you think of this, was it your own disrespect for your gender or the awful writing just flows from you? This poem says, all women are the same in behavior, they are weak, once they are hurt, they will always be that way, so women might as well kill themselves once they become heart broken. Of course your heart will never be repaired, you will never try. Its a wonder how people do see themselves for what they really are.