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Dark Pools
looking at that crystalline surface,
seeing the blue green on the brown,
deep pools so clear from the terrace,
smelling that rich earthy ground;
feeling the smooth granite with numb toes,
the cool wind blowing round about
taking it easy, just let go
looking for that simple way out;
the water cool choking out the light,
the tumult from the fountain jostles the still,
Now on into the moonless night.
How I love the mountains, still
Comments (3 Comments)
- Aiko Nakamori - 03/02/2012
- I found it wonderful how every word you said i could paint a picture in myy headd smile ,great job!
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- Nerdy_Haruhi - 02/13/2009
- amazing poetry. very discriptive.
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- Eclipsia23 - 02/12/2009
- Wow, that is beautiful!
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