Word of thought :O

• Artist: kuyniG
• Description: One day i wrote this and decide hey...i should post lol
  its my first post
  i don't know if i should call it a poem or song
  but either way lyrics are poems but told differently in tone
  
  any comments feedback and complement are welcome
  
  but mean words....I LOVE ^-^
  
  
  
• Date: 02/10/2009
• Tags: word thought lyrics poem monkeys10m

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My eyes are dried up red
My soul was burn at death
My scars were open up
This pain was left unsaid
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The only way, i can only say
That Ive loved you babe
was how I'm with you, till the end
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Too bad it ended so soon
as i look towards this moon
Just wondering how it come
To end like this
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The stars surrounding us
Are like the million dust
Of fallen memories
And mine are half of it
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Comments

[Controlled Vampiress13]

I like this one it is very good though it needs a few touches though I cant really out my fingeron it

[11th Horny Man]

The poem is good, but as a another poet, the term "babe" ruins the whole feels.

[NakedJack]

The writing itself could be better but the poetic art aspects are wonderful. Nice poem.