Rain

• Artist: A New World
• Description: A poem I wrote while sitting on a bench in Seattle, watching the rain fall all around me. :)
• Date: 02/13/2009
• Tags: rain

No pain, no worries,
just rain.

Pounding on city benches,
softening the wood.
Drenching the citizens coats,
people hiding in their buildings.
Dripping down slightly cracked windows,
moons trying to smile.
Darkening the rocks,
shifting, shaping.

Giant black gray clouds
blocking out the midnight sun.

tired, sleepy

Comments

[corrie_sohma]

it sucks nop offce

[XxXTeenage_LesXxX]

good, but remember to capitalize each new line. really its just technical stuff that's off target. otherwise, really good metaphors and imagery and such.