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Eden's Dream
by Eladrin
Shining starlight upon love's journey
Throughout the many turning wheels,celestially speaking
fragmented mirrors seeking,
Easy for a fleeting glimpse
Harder for a lasting touch.
When you kiss me you make me fly
A lesson we need to learn
Though the heart yearns to dance
Love must be lasting,let it grow to become soul-entrancing
Time is a roadway,a runway,a path to be walked with caution and care
Take it slow,let the garden grow
Fires burning to fast
doth creation destroy
You aren't alone
So please stop crying
When love is a act of destiny
When it's important and meant to be
It's impossible to be stoppable
listen to your heart
but bend a working ear
to the light which gave you life
The meaning which I want you to understand
love is a bit of destiny,a edifice to be made
Not life,nor death,can undo what is meant to be
Take it slow,let the garden grow
Fires burning to fast
doth creation destroy
That lesson must we learn
within ourselves lies Eden's grace
cast off the spiteful dream
It makes me wanna scream
Listen to your heart
but bend a working ear
to the light which gave you life
Take it slow,let the garden grow
Fires burning to fast
doth creation destroy
This is something you need to know
To change, To learn, To love and grow
Take it slow,let the garden grow
Fires burning to fast
doth creation destroy
Within ourselves lies Eden's grace
Love is a universal truth
cast off the spiteful dream
bend a working ear
to the light which gave you life
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- | Submitted on 02/16/2009 |
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- Title: Eden's Dream
- Artist: CottonCandyDragon
- Description: Eladrin is my writer alter-ego on gaia/various sites,my fiancee goes by the name of Ruby and He isn't on gaia but I wanted to include this for clarification,Pms are also welcome flames will be ignored constructive criticism shall be evaluated^_^
- Date: 02/16/2009
- Tags: edens dream respect honor passion
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Comments (1 Comments)
- catObSeSsIoN - 02/18/2009
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I love the poem!
I do think you should put spaces after your commas, though. It kind of distracts from the poem in my opinion. - Report As Spam