echo

• Artist: xx_emolicious-barbie_xx
• Description: child abuse must stop
• Date: 02/18/2009
• Tags: echo

theres tears in the eyes of a child who cries
out for love tonight
screams echo
as the neighbors turn out the lights
momie what did i do
2 deserve another bruise from you
walking a tight line
and skating on thin ice
maybe mom will be nice tonight
but here she comes cuz i ruined her life
momie tell me what did i do
to deserve another kick from you
tonight could be the night i lose my life
as the neighbors turn out the lights

Comments

[emmywinner56]

proper spelling, grammar, and punctuation would have been nice, but it's really good anyways.4/5.

[Meinami]

It’s pretty good; it could have been worth of four stars if you used proper spelling, punctuation, and grammar.