- We haven't known each other verry long,Yet I feel i've know you forever,We became so close and even closer we may grow,You have been there for me since i met you,You can hold me in your arms,Promise me no matter what you won't let me go,Even if this relationship we built ends, I will always be here for you weather you like it or not,You are so speical and i guess i am the only one who knows,Friends for life maybe even more then friendsI will always be here for you weather you like it or not,You are so speical and i guess i am the only one who knows,Friends for life maybe even more then friends
- Title: Black winged angel
- Artist: okarii777
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this is a few weeks old but i havent put it up here yet
if u wanna see more of my poems go to Rathgentle.deviantart.com - Date: 02/20/2009
- Tags: black winged angel
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Deadlylight6 - 10/27/2010
- grammar (not every line ends in commas....) good
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- Beware of His Angel - 02/23/2009
- i adore your Poetry =]
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- Sunafire - 02/22/2009
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Hmm you should really format it out a bit more. You know, use the enter key after each line or it just looks like a story xD
Other than that, the lines are good smile - Report As Spam
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