Let Me Go

• Artist: miroku fan 101
• Description: well let's just say I wrote this during a very bad time in my life. I was considering suicide and that's basically what it's about. I wanted people to let me go, I didn't want anyone to miss me really, for than I would feel guilty about leaving. Thankfully my friends talked me out of it, but whenever I read this it reminds me of that time. I thought maybe someone out there could relate and may like it so i thought I'd give this whole writing arena a shot.
  well i hope you like it ^^
• Date: 02/25/2009
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Music take me away
Some other place, some other day
Help me find a way
For once to just be okay

Play the notes I need to hear
Bringing death oh so near
Don't even bother to shed a tear
I know you wont think of missing me dear

Sing me your song so soft and light
It brings me comfort as I die this night
Let me go, do not fight
I'll disappear in the sky like a kite

I hope the music will take you away
Maybe back to the old days
Help you hold on and find a way
Than maybe you too will be okay

I'll play the notes you need to hear
Playing them to keep death at bay and me here
Even though you have not, I will cry tears
I miss you so very much dear

Singing you your song so dark yet light
Maybe it will bring you comfort as I leave you tonight
I have lost you, lost this fight
Please let me go; you cant hold on to a flying away kite

Comments

[Elemental_Wolf]

logical procession of ideas; use 'then'.
direct comparison; use 'than'.
Gave you a 5, nice to see that there is potential for metaphor use by someone around here. Even if that time in your life has passed, I do hope that you continue to write and grow.

[Hear Panda Roar]

very straight fwd and very emo it is awesome dat u didnt kill ur self cuz the friends u talked about wood b very sad