Please Daddy

• Artist: Angielaa
• Description: A girl has a father who has the traditional thinking that girls are useless and boys are blessings. All this girl wants to do is to make her father proud of her but she can't seem to be able to do that. Tell me what you think.
• Date: 02/26/2009
• Tags: please daddy parents discriminate unfair

Everything's been said
Everything's been done
Your actions they hurt
But your words had stung.

I've worked quite hard
All these years
And it was you
That I have feared.

I've been through a lot
I've been very stressed
I did so much
But failed to impress.

I have a better future
But he's still your favourite
It's such an unfair world
Where girls are discriminated.

Please Daddy please
All I care right now
Is just for you
To feel proud.

Comments

[twistedpersonality_0_0_]

AMAZING!!!! so true...

[BreeHale]

i agree w/ DDrox... except i grew up as the middle child w/ 2 brothers, lol.... keep up the good writing 5/5

[DDrox316]

i dont agree, madame jessie. since i dont have any brothers, my dad appreciates me, but unfortunately sometimes i am outshined by my younger sister cause shes an attention grabber.... sigh...
oh excellent poem, 5/5 i loved it keep up the good work! biggrin

[Madame Dark Raven]

you're better off dealing with the fact that you will never get that approval from him and be happy without it...i did and i'm so much better off.

[Madame Dark Raven]

i don't think a daughter will ever get the approval of her father...i should know been trying since i was 6, 12 years have past now and i no longer try for the simple reason it hurts to much and he refuses to even speak to me. There have been times when i thought to myself things would have been better if i were the son he wanted, but he has a son...my brother...and he treats us like equals. No good, useless beings, so in return we don't even bother with him anymore.