Waiting

• Artist: -VSF-Gaara
• Description: yes i took the first 1 1/2 lines from the song Your Call from secondhand serenade but i did the rest. they kind of inspired me to write this.
  
  i know it may not be all that good but im just starting poetry and i just did this now because i got bored
• Date: 02/26/2009
• Tags: your call

Waiting for your
Call im sick, call im dying.
i really need to hear your voice
before i sleep forever.
I will wait for you forever
Wherever i go after this.
I will wait with patience.
Waiting for you everyday.
Hoping the time I awake,
You'll be there waiting for me.
When you do, it'll be like
A new beginning or the start
Of the inescapable end.
Either way we will be togethter
Forever, waiting and waiting.

Comments

[littlenv7]

could use a little work but since your just getting into poetry, its good

[-VSF-Gaara]

i ish need de comments