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We are alone with no one to guide us.
We have fallen with no one to pick us up.
We have lost faith,faith in ourselves.
We are forever gone.
- by Takashi Samura |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/28/2009 |
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- Title: Everything lost...forever
- Artist: Takashi Samura
- Description: nothing seems right now but just to have known this it feels like I have fallen.
- Date: 02/28/2009
- Tags: everything lostforever
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Comments (2 Comments)
- KIMANI113 - 03/04/2009
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It is 'o.k.', though I do suggest you add more emotion into it. Overall, nice.
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- Renata Of the Volturi - 03/02/2009
- You should give it mroe emotion and sadness make it just a lil bit longer and it will be persfect 4/5 for trying
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