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i stand here alone,
someone answer,
i write this alone,
someone answer,
i feel empty and alone,
someone answer,
now i die alone,
because no one answered...
- by Origanal Scarface |
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- | Submitted on 03/05/2009 |
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- Title: Someone Answer...
- Artist: Origanal Scarface
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Description:
A little poem i wrote while being bored... (and it may sound emo but I'm not) please rate
-Origanal Scarface - Date: 03/05/2009
- Tags: someone answer
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Koi Wa Tatakai - 05/22/2009
- It lacks substance. Brings no emotion and seems pretty simple (and not in a good way). I think it shows exactly how bored you were.
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- Apm_rpl - 03/12/2009
- xD I like it smile I write depressing poetry myself, and I'm not emo. smile I think it could use some improvement. Maybe add something that makes you think this, give more detail as well, and possibly put a period after every other sentence. Other then that, it's great.
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- Marionette_Mentation - 03/05/2009
- lacking i think you could do much better, and someone is always their to answer, you simply have to look in the right direction..comment back plz
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