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" My LiFe "
"I tried to fit in, but I can't...
I tried to love, but no one understands,
I tried to smile, whenever I'm sad.
But, no one even cares to know, how much pain, that I had.
But, someday I will walk,
together with people, I know.
And feel happiness, and the kindness that they show.
And whenever i'm grieving, someone will comfort me.
Someone who understands, who cares, and loves me.
But, when will this day come? Is it when I am done?
This place that I'm dreaming about... Is it worth for me to fit in,
with no doubt? Come one and sentence me, and tell me how to fit in.
'Cuz I'm tired of being alone. And I'm tired of the hatred that
people have shown..... -_- "
- by iieLKillerDolLeLii |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/08/2009 |
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- Title: " This Is My Life "
- Artist: iieLKillerDolLeLii
- Description: Simple... This is my life! ..... -_-
- Date: 03/08/2009
- Tags: life fitin
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Mark of insanity - 12/12/2009
- the bottom line is its good it could flow better though 3/5
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- Paper Crane Kiko - 12/12/2009
- i think it could ryme a little bit better... but yeah ive been there done that your peom is okay
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- dark bunny 567 - 03/13/2009
- cool
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- Nick5563 - 03/08/2009
- awesome...
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