Sharp, Bitter Regrets

• Artist: ThisIsMyDeathbed_x
• Description: Yet another dark poem involving a bit of sharp glass and flesh. Read ad comment. DOn't forget to rate it (4 or 5? :P )
• Date: 03/08/2009
• Tags: sharp bitter regrets

A thick sheet of dust covers the mantelpiece,
A vacant photo frame,
That used to contain my picture lies there,
On it’s side,
Facing the back wall in abhorrence,
They can’t stand the fact I used to be appreciated.
They can’t stand the fact I was there.

The cold, dark stairs where I used to sit,
Loom precariously before my eyes,
I recall myself crying,
Solid to the spot on the central stair
Too scared to move…
Too scared to breathe...
Too scared to exist...

My room door remained firmly shut,
As if it were room 101,
And I was inside.
Tears staining my face,
I still remember where I hid it,
That bit of solid, knife-like glass,
That I tried to end my life with.

I can recapture the sensation,
The jagged glass incising my skin,
It felt good,
Like I was somewhat lifting the anguish.
Blood trickled to my floor.

The stain is still there,
Maroon against the lavender carpet.
A tree amongst the flowers…
Regret amongst the memories…
A memory always on my mind…

Comments

[ThisIsMyDeathbed_x]

Awwww my god, thank you all!!!!!! biggrin I really appreciate it. i have a twisty stomach now - i think it's happiness : xd

[cre8ive_ovadose]

i love this!! it's very fractured and doesn't have any flow whatsoever but it's so amazing that way! i wish i could write poetry like this for school - well i did but nothing like this... great job! 5/5

[Emo Secks Toy]

your really good at writing keep it up an maybe we can go back an forth with are work at sometime

[Seringa]

Wow, this is good. it's very descriptive.

[faux_fur_rabbit]

Ooh, pretty. But, I'm kind of confused.. ( I have that problem sometimes) 5/5 though. I love it to death, so to speak.

[ThisIsMyDeathbed_x]

It''s not supposed to have a natural flow. It's all over the place to show that her life is like that xd

[Shortstopkate]

nice, but i think more than anything it maybe needs maybe a bit more natural flow to it.... i dunno, thats just they way houw i like to do my things. but yeah nice job