last minutes in the fog

• Artist: neyyt777
• Description: dead sailors poem.
  
  and also its my first poem so please dont be brutel with me on the comments ii never was good a writing poetry!!!!
• Date: 03/11/2009
• Tags: last minutes

we dont know which way we're going,
or which way we're really going.
flaming gates of hell are opening,
golden gates of heven are now closing.
we hudle now close in fear,
death is very now and near.
her eyes as dark as the night sky,
why oh why is our time neigh?
my darling love, ill miss you so,
my darling love do not let go.
dont ever forget, and do not regret,
my love for you will not grow old.

Comments

[icefox5]

mhm..very good...but i can't tell..r u dying? or is she dying? or r both of u dying?

[zero_shadowbringer]

its good