What Would Exist?

• Artist: Kawaii_Rainbow_Angel
• Description: Its about good and bad and how even though you might want one or the other gone it's imposible that with one gone for the other to exist.
• Date: 03/16/2009
• Tags: goodandevil wish exist

If there were no evil would all be good?
All would be nothing, not as it should
Withou any darkness would there still be light?
The balance thrown off, there would be no sight.
And wishing the evil away
would let the bad things come to play
for surely you are a coward
If you wish away fear
Balance
Remember yin and yang

Comments

[Asa Nisi Mese]

I like the theme and really like the overall composition until the very end.The last 2 lines feel sort of like you suddenly switched writing styles and it is a bit jarring. They jarred feeling doesn't fit with the overall theme of the poem

[wmiinkdeys]

This is good. I like the begining and im iffy on the middle towards the end. Reading it was a good start but jumbled in the center. I like the path you took of this Balance theme. It's very creative. Good job.

[Idiosyncratic Quirk]

>_< This conflicts with an idea I have. Darkness is the absence of light, making many of these questions answerable instead of rhetorical but I get the gist of it.