Fading Memory

• Artist: Mew Shiori
• Description: I felt... umm... idk... =/ I just felt like wen I wrote this someone imoirtant to me was missing... even if that person was right next to me...
• Date: 03/18/2009
• Tags: fading memory

I look upon you face
I see your smile,
and I hear your laugh...
But, I cant remember them...

Your voice, I can barely hear
Its become a soft whisper in my ear
and that makes me fear, the worst is near...
That I may never see you again...

Tears are welling up in my eyes
MY vison is blurred
I see a figure Im not able to identify...
The figure keeps twisting, and changing...

Crying out in sobs of sorrow and pain...
Im afraid... So afraid
I dont want this memory to fade away...
Its such a sweet memory...

This faceless figure in front of me...
Why cant I remember you?
You the phantom of my past... Please make yourself known...
In my mind, to forget is worse then death...

My memories are fading fast...
Like a dim candle that wont last...
And as the light flickers and fades
So too does my memory...

Comments

[yuni wulf -- Alpha Angel]

I hope things get better somehow, considering the words of the poem... it seems your going through a difficult time!

[yuni wulf -- Alpha Angel]

wow, I love it. I was coming here to post a poem of mine and I had to read it, I think its an amazing poem! true, if it were touched up a bit you cud prolly get it published! but Ill still say its good as it is...

[ElvenFalcon]

I like it! A lot. And I frequently tell people to do this, but if you didn't put quite so many '...'s in there, this would be really .. I donno. I like it already -- A whole whole lot.