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heart I nEeD uR aRmS aRoUnD mE
I nEeD uR lAuGh To SeT mE fReE
I nEed uR hAnD tO sTeAdY mE
I nEed uR sTrEnGtH wHeN mInE iS gOnE
I nEed uR hEaRt To LeAn On heart
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- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/18/2009 |
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- Title: I need
- Artist: Sheata_AngelCat
- Description: its 4 couples only
- Date: 03/18/2009
- Tags: ineed
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Comments (4 Comments)
- FuriazFTW - 03/22/2009
- ditto to what xhollywoodsDEAD said. Aside from that, you also showed incorrect grammar... Also, there wasn't anything that required thought, nothing unique about it, no elements of poetry at all. Except for repetition, that is. 1/5.
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- xhollywoodsDEAD - 03/19/2009
- The message of your poem is nice. However the raping of the shift key kind of put me off..
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- Prince Scylavos - 03/19/2009
- Kinda touching.. I'm not one to feel like that tho(not very social of on free will) still haven't figured out the caps for every other letter tho i suppose it's creative tho a bit detracting
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- Sheata_AngelCat - 03/18/2009
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its sorta free verse.....n i added on to the first one i created
I need ur hand to steady me
i need ur luagh to set me free
I need ur strength when mine is gone
i need ur heart to lean on
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