man at war

• Artist: lonelyfangirl
• Description: just some work i had to do for my languge class its from THE PEARL by JOHN STEINBECK
  QUESTION:is it good i cant change it but tell me if you like it its my first time writeing this cind of peom tell me if the punctuation is corret
  THANKS IN ADVANCED
• Date: 03/18/2009
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A battle cry.Side by side black fear
the light of burning was ugly it was gray,
for a moment uncertainty arose as dangerous as arising storm.

His eyes glanced neither right nor left nor up nor down,
but stated only straight.
He carried fear with him.

from The Pearlby John Steinbeck

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