you and you

• Artist: bingbang_its_paige
• Description: a poem i wrote in the spur of the moment instead of crying over the relatonship i wrote it down into a poem tell me what you think
• Date: 03/19/2009
• Tags: breakup

It was I, me, myself.
Until a day you met I,
Fell in love with me.
You chased I day and night,
Promised days bright.
I ignored you.
You pleaded me,
said all you want is we.
You made faces to I,
I could not deny.
Fight, pain, tears, hurt,
followed like a rule.
When I turned back,
It was you and you.
There was No me, No I.
realized it was not love,
but ego to win over I.
Because I don't exist anymore,
I was replaced with you.

Comments

[WinterSpringSummerFall]

Um . . . it was O.K. Too many Is though. And yes, I i get the meaning. Sorry.

[Mud99]

You should have just cried

[The Judged Book]

It's cool.

I honestly don't get the meaning, I'll have to re-read it, but I like it! I'm going to favorite it, and get back with what I think it means, if that's alright. biggrin